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Playing sports helps to reduce stress.

To sum it up, I want to stress that sport has many positive effects on our body and mind. Participation in sport activities helps us not only to cope with stress, but also develop a big variety of useful skills.

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I do not think that these people are right. As I mentioned before, sport is the main weapon in the fight against stress and depression. Sport must be included in daily routine of all people, who care about physical and mental health. Besides, sport boosts our energy and helps us succeed in all spheres of life.

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People face a lot of challenges in life. They increase the risk of stress and anxiety. What can help us to cope with them? Some people claim that the best way to cut the risk of stress is doing sports, whereas other people stick to the opposite opinion.

From my way of thinking, the benefits of sports for our mental health are abundant. To begin with, according to numerous studies when we play sport our body produces endorphins, the body’s natural painkillers and mood elevators. Our body also reduces the level of stress hormones, such as adrenaline and cortisol. Secondly, sport helps us distract from daily routine and problems, which are the main triggers of stress. In addition, sport gradually enhances our self – esteem. When we achieve some results in sport, we earn the sense of self – confidence and pride.

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Playing sport helps to reduce stress

However, some people do not agree with this statement. They claim that sport is not helpful. They also say that sport is only waste of energy and time.

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Письменное задание 09 по ЕГЭ. Английский язык

Comment on the following statement:

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
— make an introduction (state the problem)
— express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
— express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
— explain why you don’t agree with the opposing opinion
— make a conclusion restating your position

Some people say that playing sports helps to reduce stress whereas others claim that sport might be dangerous for health.

I think that sports reduce the level of stress indeed . First those who play sports forget about their problems while they are playing. It means that stress is being displaced by positive emotions. Second there is a lot of scientific research that proves usefulness of sport. Stress is the result of hard work, overwork or some unpleasant activity mixed with worry. Playing sports is a pleasant activity that naturally neutralizes stress.

At the same time there are cases when people harmed their heath doing sports. For example , they broke their legs or arms playing football. Or they had a big fight after playing rugby.

In my opinion we should not confuse playing sports and overdoing sports. I’ve tried it a lot of times. After having a lot of stressful lessons when I felt absolutely horrible, we went to play football and it totally recovered me. I was ready to study again.

In conclusion , I’d like to say that playing sport is a great thing that reduces stress. I believe that surely playing sports could be dangerous and one could expect some minor injuries like bruises and scratches. If one’s careful enough there should be nothing more than that. Playing sports helps us keep calm and stable mentally, which is an important part of our overall wellbeing. Any harmless activity can become harmful if one’s not careful. One should play sports under the supervision of an experienced person and everything will be fine.

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